Please correct my english?

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To begin, I love the historical genrein movies. But as a rule, good movies of this type is very small. That's because the companies are fighting for money, but not for the idea. Most often the basis for the plot takes frome some one great event and it squeezed so that it looks like a piece of cake, bitten on all sides. Probably the main reason for the failure of such films is that the people working on the movie, do not know history and distort the truth about certain events.

Here, the story covers an entire era, the era of kings, conspiracies, betrayals. And because there is no time frame (since this series), the directors have paid more attention to small details (details that may not carry the historical burden, but that increase interest in viewing). Therefore, the plot turned out the most detailed, interesting and logically aligned, without any cuts and inconsistencies.



Costume worked perfectly. You would think it strange that I touched on this topic, but I think it is important. We show old England and all must comply with those standards. In most movies of the historical genre that does not pay enough attention. And it seems that the heroes of any historical film dressed in the same clothes. This is a very eye colitis. But in this series, I see what the characters are dressed, and I believe that this is the old England.



The cast is very large. I'm not going to talk about each actor. All of them are in accordance with his character. There are a lot of both known and unknown actors. But I was even happy. It would be ridiculous and absurd to see here the actors who shine in every film. The novelty is always interesting, and there is no ulterior motive or what that someone is not suitable for such a role. In general, boys, lads, played magnificently.



Lovers of historical genre devoted. They will be satisfied. It is a quality show. It will not cost a lot of time, because there are only 8 episodes. But these series might be remembered to you a very long time. And I think that today it is one of the best historical paintings of TV serials and films, and "Pillars of the Earth" earned that title.Please correct my english?
"To begin, I love the historical movies. In general, however, there are not very many good movies of this type. This is because the companies are producing them in order to make money, not in order to express the idea in the best way. Most often the basis for the plot is taken from some great event and it squeezed so that it look like a piece of cake, bitten on all sides. The main reason for the failure of such films is probably that the people working on the movie do not know history [and therefore distort the truth about certain events.] or [or distort the truth about certain events.]



Here, the story covers an entire era, the era of kings, conspiracies, betrayals. Because there is no time limit (?) (since this is series), the directors have paid more attention to small details (details that may not carry great historical significance, but that increase interest in viewing). Therefore, the plot was very detailed, interesting, and logically aligned, without any cuts or inconsistencies.



Costumes were historically accurate. You might think it strange that I touch on this topic, but I think it is important. This series concerns old England and therefore should comply with those standards of dress. In most movies of the historical genre, the producers do not pay enough attention to costumes. It often seems that the heroes of historical films all dress in the same clothes. This is hard on the eyes {I think this is what you were trying to say, however, it's a bit informal for an essay. I would say - "This is jarring to those who know these outfits are not historically accurate"}. In this series, however, when I see how the characters are dressed, I believe that this is old England.



The cast is very large. I'm not going to talk about each actor. All of them act in accordance with his character. There are both known and unknown actors, but I was happy even though some actors were inexperienced. It would be ridiculous and absurd to expect actors to shine in every film. The novelty was interesting, and there was no ulterior motive when determining if someone was suitable for such a role. In general, the young actors (?) played magnificently.



Devoted lovers of historical genre will be satisfied. This series is a quality show. It will not consume to much time, because there are only 8 episodes. This is a small price to pay for a series that will be remembered for a very long time. I think that "Pillars of the Earth" earns its title as one of the best historical paintings of TV serials and films."



You might want to also clarify what series you are talking about earlier on in the essay. Also, if this is a formal essay, it is generally best not to use "I" or "You". In most cases, you want to use the third person. But depending on the purpose of this essay, it's probably fine. Finally, remember to NEVER start a sentence with "and" or "but"; these are conjunctions which are intended to combine two related sentence into a single sentence.